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 Steve Irwin 15: The Pheonix And Dinodoctor


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Posted: Jan 26 2004, 05:16 AM
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"WHew, it's a good thing we only saw us dieing in that alternate dimension portal created by the dead pheonix!"

"You got that right Nesse, but I just have one question....HOW IN THE HECK ARE WE GOING TO GET OUT OF THESE THINGS!!" Shouted Ron.

"be thankful I used that crystal to stop your fall at the last second!" Yeti, now quite irriated, relpyed.

Using the crystal Yeti had stoped their deaths and was able to transport them all the way to the whitehouse undidected.....but Dinodoctor and the now reincarnated pheonix where already there. They had to find some way in.

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---A little ryhme by me! hmm... that's made me hungry, I think I'll have a sandwitch now....
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Posted: Jan 26 2004, 02:27 PM
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Suddenly the Crypto Police show up, they put Steve and the gang in handcuffs

"Your under arrest for violating code 6789" an officer says

"Whats tha-" An officer slaps Bigfoot in the head, Bigfoot starts to cry

"Don't speak!! were taking you downtown" the Sherrif says, Hermione faints

"AAAUUUUUGGGH!!" Nessie screams in fury, they walk for about 19 hours until they reach the station, the gang is thrown in a jail cell

"Why are we here?? what did we do?" they all were asking

"Silence!!" a big voice booms "When you violate code 6789, you shouldn't be talking!!" a large muscular man walks in

"Who are you?" BIgfoot asks

"If your guilty, I'm your new bootcamp sargent Private! DO I MAKE MYSELF CLEAR???!!!!??" he screams spraying the gang with saliva

"What's code 6789?" Steve asks

"It's the law of physics in Phancy, the town your in right now, your not allowed to have green eyes" The sheriff tells them, they all have green eyes except Mantis

"That's not fair!" Hermione says regaining consciousness "Thats-" she faints again

"Now you've broken law 19,554,443,776!! your goin' down private!" Sargent Bootcampboss shouts , Nessie takes out a bottle of "Faints be gone" and shoves a bunch of the pills down Hermione's throat

"AHA!! you even have medicine up your sleeve? thats two more codes you've broken!! code 892 which clearly states that medicine is not prohibited and code 55,000,000! which cleary states that your not suppossed to have sleeves!!" Sherrif screams at them

CRASH!! someone crashes through the roof of the jail cell!

"OH NO! IT'S DINODOCTER!!" the gang shouts

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Posted: Jan 27 2004, 08:33 AM
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Dinodoctor takes a step foward "RRRRRRRROOOOOOAAAAAAAAAR--OW!"
he stepped on a nail and starts to jump around and he destroys the cell

"Lets get out of here!" Bigfoot yells, and they all run off


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Posted: Jan 27 2004, 05:51 PM
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"Ahhh! You broke another rule! Code 123 says you shouldn't escape! Hey! Come back!" the sheriff cried. "Whoa big guy! You're violating code 456! You are an unknown species."

!Crunch!

"Hello," Smartguy greeted. "I have prepared a new ship: The Cryptoship!"

The Galactic Defenders stared at the giant wooden canoe on the dirt.

"Get in!" Smartguy urged.

They all got in and Steve started rowing. "This isn't as bad as I thought." Steve remarked.

"ROOOAAAARRRR!!!" DinoDoctor screams right behind them.

Hermione is about to faint when Nessie slaps some pills into her mouth, some slipping out.

"ROOOAAA- Gulp!" DinoDoctor swallows a bunch and starts to fall.

"ROW FASTER!" Bigfoot cried.

"I'm trying! HOw fast can a boat go on land!!!" Steve said, rowing crazily.

Suddenly, Giant Porcupine notices the boat going slow as a snail as the DinoDoctor looms over them. "Oh for Pete's Sake!"

With that, Porcupine kicks the boat out of DD's way, unknown to anyone.

"Yahoo!" Mantis exclaimed. "Great job Steve! This is the best canoe ever! We're flying!!!!!!"

!SmAsH!

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Posted: Jan 28 2004, 05:30 PM
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They've run smack into a mountain, they start to fall

"AAAUUUUUUGGGH!" they land on the ground (duh) Hermione gets knocked out cold

"That's it! I say we take fainty here to the clinic!!" Nessie screams, they take her to a ranger station/clinic/casino

"Well, it seems to me that Hermione has a rapid infection spreading throughout her body" The docter/blackjack dealer says

"Oh no!! what is it!??!" they all shout

"Oh, it's very simple if you think about it" Dr. blackjack says

"WHAT IS THE STUPID INFECTION!!!???!!" they all scream at Dr. BJ

Dr. BJ steps back, hurt "Well, if your going to yell at me, forget I said anything at all" BJ starts to cry "I'm so depressed! just give Hermione a cup full of mustard pretzels and she'll be back to normal" he runs out the door sobbing uncontrolably

"What's going on?" Hermione asks regaining consciousness

"Your sick, we need to feed you a cup of-"

CRASH!!!

"Oh no!! it's-

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Posted: Jan 28 2004, 06:22 PM
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DinoDoctor!"

"NOOOO!" he shouted. "Hermione's consciousness is the source of my power!!! Get her to faint again!"

With that, he grabbed a hammer and attempted to kick Hermione at the same time. But the hammer smashed into his puny little toe.

"OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!"

"Owl?" Hermione asked. "Here you go."

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Posted: Jan 28 2004, 10:06 PM
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Just then the sun explodes and they are all destroyed.
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Notice I am not putting "The End". Just a note so that certain posters don't mistake this as an ending *glares at certain poster*

Certain Poster: What did I do?
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JUST KIDDING!
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Real story: The owl quickly devours the Dinodocoter. Meanwhile, a man named Gris plans his revenge on the world for using him as an example for a bad word.

To be continued...

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