Here are some of the examples:
"perhaps as a result of..." => "perhaps because of"
"the only thing they really have is the past" => "the only thing they have is the past"
"it's absolutely essential that..." => "it's essential that..."
"someone who says their ultimate goal is to..." => "someone who says their goal is to..."
The biggest issue here is none of those phrases are actually grammatically incorrect (MS Word just corrected what I said to "
The sad part is people learning to write for the first time would likely trust the spellcheck to clean up all "errors" in their writing. It's not an error to say more than you have to to make a point.
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I flew to the sun and was burned.
I listened to the sun and could hear only silence.
I sat back in peace and felt the warmth of its rays.